Raining in the night.
Now sunshine,so bright.
Thundering like the falling sky.
Revenging with every drop falling by.
Changing season symbolizes happiness and joy.
Nevertheless these tears shall also not dry.
All the efforts and cravings will pass by.
And what will be left behind.
Are just the loving hearts and divine minds.
I did not like it.
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Sunshine in the night?
Cravings will past?
You need to reframe the poem.
was trying hands at a different level of poetry.. may be couldn't connect well..
ReplyDeletehere it goes.. thanks for guiding.. keep motivating..
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